Thursday, April 10, 2014

if you like my poems let them by E. E. Cummings

if you like my poems let them
walk in the evening,a little behind you

then people will say
"Along this road i saw a princess pass
on her way to meet her lover(it was
toward nightfall)with tall and ignorant servants."

Analysis

E.E. Cummings sticks to his style by writing his poem in lowercase letters. When says, "if you like my poems let them walk in the evening,a little behind you," it's as if he wants you to keep them in mind. The second stanza establishes what happens if you do keep his poems in mind. He tells us that we can see "a princess pass on her way to meet her lover (it was toward nightfall) with tall and ignorant servants." This being said, putting E.E. Cummings poems behind you allow you to see the world in his point of view.

An interesting thing is how there's only one capitalized letting in the poem. Capitalizing only one letter brings a bigger contrast to the rest of the poem. It can be used to show that this is what you can see if you were to like my poems. But another interesting thing is when Cummings has to point out the time when the person sees the princess and puts it separately from the rest.


sincerely yours,
the breakfast club basketcase

4 comments:

  1. I like how you pointed out the capital letter because I didn't really notice. And I kinda wish you would talked about the princess in the poem but overall a really good job!

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  2. First of all, I agree with Julia about the identification of the capital lettering because I also didn't realize its importance until you pointed it out. I think you had good information and created a good analysis

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  3. The way you pointed out the lower case letters was splendid! The stanza break was also simply delightful, I completely agree with all your comments. What I most enjoyed was the capitalization thing you mentioned I had not even noticed it.

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  4. I have to admit, when I read the first two lines of the poem, it seemed a bit creeperish, but your analysis of it makes much more sense considering the style of the author. I like that you mentioned the author's stylistic approach of the capitalization. It does high-light the one capitalized word even more.

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